Letter of Rejection
Dear Juliet,
There’s this rumour doing the rounds:
That I’m in love with you
I’d like to put an end to it
By proving it’s not true.
I never really stare at you
I just ignore the people around you
I never really think of you
I just imagine having a girlfriend like you
I never really flirt with you
I just tell you what other boys keep to themselves
And I never really ask you out
I just find you beside me when I go to dreamland…
Hey
There’s this rumour doing the rounds:
That I’m in love with you
It sounds funny, but
I’m starting to think it’s true.
Say…
If I loved you
Would you love me back?
If yes, then I love you
If no, then I don’t.
Yours truly,
Romeo
Tom Jalio
Kenya
Hi, Beverley.
ReplyDeleteThank you for posting the poem here.
The way the sentences run into each other affects the reading experience. Is there a way the line structure can be retained?
Cheers,
Tom Jalio.
Thank you for responding to my request. It reads much better now.
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